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Post by Rebirthing on Sept 10, 2008 14:22:59 GMT -5
THE ESSENTIALSName: Age: PB: Affiliation: (Survivor, Other or Tailie.) IN-DEPTH STRENGTHS- List what your character’s good at.
WEAKNESSES- The opposite of above! List what your character’s not good at.
APPEARANCE Include distinguishing marks, if any, eye color, hair color, basic dress, etc. Please don’t skimp. PERSONALITY What’s your character like? BACKSTORY I don’t need a novel, but I would like to know what your character’s been up to. WRITING SAMPLE Again, don't need a novel, just supply something that flaunts your style. OOCYour name or alias: Your age: How we can contact you:
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Post by kateausten on Sept 22, 2008 17:38:42 GMT -5
THE ESSENTIALS Name: Kate Austen Age: 26 PB: Evangeline Lilly Affiliation: (Survivor, Other or Tailie.) Plane Crash Survivor IN-DEPTH STRENGTHS Kate is very good at getting what she wants. If she wants something, she'll get it. She's very good at defending herself. She wants to do pretty much everything she can to protect herself, and keep herself safe. She's not very good with caring about other people since the one she did care about died in her hands. She is very good at getting away from the hands of the law. She always wants to run away. WEAKNESSES Kate can not be honest with herself. She can not tell the truth about her past, and she can't tell how she really feels on the inside. She is always trying to hide her true identity and she can't figure out who she really truly loves. APPEARANCE Her natural hair color is blonde, but she really doesn't know what her hair color is anymore since she constantly dyes it. It's been every color in the book from what she remembers. She has blue eyes and is very slender. She's the perfect fit for a woman but not fit for a fugitive from the law. PERSONALITY Hardcore. She's always running, always risking everything to just get away from it all. She's very cocky and she always wants things to go her way. But since coming to the Island, it changed her personality and made her care about the people she's with. Something that's unlike Kate's previous lifestyle. So she can really care if she wants to. BACKSTORY Kate is always trying to figure out what Jack Shepard is up to. She's always following him around, trying to see what exactly is going on. She wonders if Jack discovered her secret, that she was on the run while back in Australia. But, Kate is trying to get him to second-guess and has no idea that she might share something in common with Sawyer. Kate still has guilty feelings about what happened to her childhood sweetheart, Tom Brennan, and is glad that that the Marshal she was traveling on the plane with was killed. She secretly wishes that she could of done that herself, but she didn't want to give away her secret identity too fast. All she is trying to do right now is to survive. WRITING SAMPLE Kate was walking up to Sawyer's tent because Jack specifically asked her for some medicine to help Shannon. Kate was so tired of Saywer's attitude that she could beat the guy up herself, but would that solve anything? She walked up and threw her backpack down at Sawyer's feet. "Alright Sawyer. Enough with the act. Give me the damn medicine now." Kate was pissed. She looked directly into Sawyer's eyes and stared at him. "Well? Are you going to give them to me or do I have to take them from you myself?" OOC Your name or alias: Stacy Your age: 22 How we can contact you: I have a HP site. z10.invisionfree.com/magicalharrypotter. Contact me there in the C-box.
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Post by Rebirthing on Sept 22, 2008 23:32:15 GMT -5
Hi Stacy! I'd like definitely more depth in the RP sample. A good two or three paragraphs, beefing it up a bit? Show me how you can be really her.
Also the bio for what happened before the crash would be great.
A little more on personality, try to spread out the 'beefing' as a whole. Can't wait to see!
Also when registering please register with the first and last name of your character without spaces. You can change your name later inb profile/ edit profile.
Could you make a new topic with the same name with the revised up app? Thanks so much!
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